The overall scene is nice (I'm not critiquing the background sky which looks a bit off); the subject matter has a good colour palette - the two stories of grey and white look pretty good together. Structurally, I feel like the sharp corners between some of your stairs on the roof which gives the roofing an unrealistic feel, as houses don't have sharp points - there should be an upside-down stair to compensate for the lack of block there. The walls at the back are a good colour - liking the brown/orange to contrast the green grass. I do feel however the centre window on the second floor is a bit small considering how large the wall is. Other than that, great work!
oh gosh, this is amazing. you're such an amazing minecraft artist. i bet it took awhile to make this look perfect. true, the sky does look a bit... well, off. i'm not counting it though. it just looks amazing, it's all i can say to you. i'm honestly blown away, i dont think i could ever build something as amazing as you. be proud of yourself, you did awesomesause! maybe you can make more minecraft buildings intelligent the future like hospitals. its up to you though, its just an idea. i hope you'll make more cool minecraft buildings later! <3